The only thing that I was wondering about was the last line. Is it with your first sentence? Or are you just explaining your verse? I think your analogy is strong without the short explaination at the bottom. The last line sort of makes it simplistic and less powerful.
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Awesome analogy.
The comparison of the aid of flashcards for little children and the aid of youtube for high school kids- it's just so accurate.
The only thing that I was wondering about was the last line. Is it with your first sentence? Or are you just explaining your verse? I think your analogy is strong without the short explaination at the bottom. The last line sort of makes it simplistic and less powerful.
Thanks, the last line was just another version of the metaphor. They weren't actually ment to be read as one thing, but I didn't make that clear.
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